Alternative Medicine
atleast 5paragraphs.
1:Intro:You state why you do not defend the opposite topic.
2,3,4: supporting information
5.- conclution
Alterntive medicine is the natural treatment of disease and existed since ancient times long before conventional medicine was ever introduced and if you think of human history it will not be hard to defend this kind of medicine. In fact , "alternative medicine" is been practiced for about 2.000 years before the conventional medicine, so this is relatively new and not traditional .Conventional medicine should rightly be called " alterntive ".Beside, we have no reason to admit that Western medicine is better than alternative just because is the one they mostly teach in medical schools and because is medicine as practiced by most of MDs( medical doctor)
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The conventional medicine is concerned with treating the symptoms of disease by scientific techniques and technology instead of treating the whole person and the cause of disease. We all know that the same treatment cannot be situable for everyone since each one is unique in his physical, mental, and spiritual build.
It is not a secret how powerfull is and how much money earns the farmaceutical industry. Many conventional health proffesional have risen against drug prices, accusing the industry of having lost its moral compass and introducing more altenative medicine treatments to their pacients.
Today, 20% of adults use some kind of complementary and alternative medicine ( CAM ) in pursuit of health and well-being. CAM practice are, over time, become widely acepted. Acupuncture, Yoga, Meditation and natural products including Probiotic and Botanicals are pretty much accepted even for conventional health professionals because of their great results
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Finally, the alternative medicine treatments are very promising ,doctors are including them for disease treatments, are a lot less expensive than pharmaceutical treatments and people are using this kind of medicine because seeks to treat the whole person and each one as an unique human being.
I believe is a great possibility and I recomended.
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Franco, some corrections to your work:
ResponderEliminarAlternative medicine is the natural treatment of disease and it existed since ancient times long before conventional medicine was ever introduced and if you think of human history it will not be hard to defend this kind of medicine. In fact , "alternative medicine" has been practiced for about 2.000 years before the conventional medicine, so this is relatively new and not traditional .Conventional medicine should rightly be called " alternative ". Besides, we have no reason to admit that Western medicine is better than alternative just because it is the one they mostly teach in medical schools and because it is medicine as practiced by most of MDs ( medical doctor).
The conventional medicine is concerned with treating the symptoms of disease by scientific techniques and technology instead of treating the whole person and the cause of disease. We all know that the same treatment cannot be situable for everyone since each one is unique in his physical, mental, and spiritual build.
It is not a secret how powerful is and how much money the pharmaceutical industry earns. Many conventional health professionals have risen against drug prices, accusing the industry of having lost its moral compass and introducing more alternative medicine treatments to their patients.
Today, 20% of adults use some kind of complementary and alternative medicine ( CAM ) in pursuit of health and well-being. CAM practice has, over time, become widely accepted. Acupuncture, Yoga, Meditation and natural products including Probiotic and Botanicals are pretty much accepted even for conventional health professionals because of their great results.
Finally, alternative medicine treatments are very promising , doctors are including them for disease treatments, are a lot less expensive than pharmaceutical treatments and people are using this kind of medicine because it seeks to treat the whole person and each one as an unique human being.
I believe it is a great possibility and I recommend it.